Beatrix Learns the Steps Ch. 02

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'What the hell was this?' Eric asked after triple checking that he had left the meeting.

'I was needy.' I replied and batted my eyes.

'Bee, this totally inappropriate. Just imagine if did the same to you.'

'Eat me out while I was on a meeting with Margo?' Eric knew Margo and I knew he had a thing for her. Well, for her tits at least.

I'm sorry,' I said when I saw his face. He was hurt. 'There was this jerk at the bar... I had to get it out of my system.'

'Listen, can you stand up from there?'

I did. When he saw my fingers deeply lodged in my pussy he shook his head.

'And have you managed...' he trailed off raising his brow questioningly.

'No. Yes.'

He laughed finally, came around the sofa and hugged me. I hugged him back. With both arms.

'You reek cum.' Eric whispered in my ear. His breath tickled my hair.

'I have a very important question for you.' I felt his body tensing. 'How many attendants were on the meeting?'

He pulled away from me. His eyes had a strange spark in them.

'About fifteen. The whole local management, an executive director from Singapore. Three US partners. And the rest. Couple of them women.'

'And are you proud of me?'

'God, yes! And eternally thankful...'

'Just think about it on Monday when you walk into the office and greet all of these people. Think about that they all saw your wife's face covered in your jizz. And come home to me and know that I would to that again at your first command.'

He grabbed me, kissed my cum covered lips hard. Then he pushed me forward across the back of the sofa.

I opened my legs wide.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Wonderful!

Please don't leave, (reader on their knees with clasped hands)!!

5*

Beatrix_PleineluneBeatrix_Pleinelunealmost 4 years agoAuthor
Huh folks, this was intense.

First of all: Hi Everyone!

I apologise if I stepped on a few toes. As you probably already have guessed I do not mind a little humiliation, and reading the first couple of comments felt like I was the heroine of my story.

Thank you all for for the constructive comments as I was not familiar with the unwritten(?) laws of the LW section. First chapter was Non consent, but I thought the second would fit better for LV. To make things worse part trois is pretty much Exhibitionist.

It's never easy to be a kinky girl...

Maybe I should contact Literotica team and ask them to add a new category: Beatrix deals with her urges? Anyway I go back to Non consent and stick with it.

To mattenw: it seems you like the story in general but are very concerned about the cuckolding aspect? I do not like spoilers, but since it is my first story here, I am willing to declare that there will be no cuckolding in the usual sense. Beatrix will not give her body to another man. There is only one man for her.

On the other hand...

She is not into women but gets off on humiliation so having sex with another woman...

Will we have a chapter fitting for the Lesbian section?

Well that is all for now.

Thanks again everyone!

PolyLvrPolyLvralmost 4 years ago
I loved it.

Don't let all thses pissy little pseudo men put you off.

I enjoyed the hell out of it.

luedonluedonalmost 4 years ago
Welcome to the LW Commentariat

Ah Ms Bee, only a few comments so far, but they are the usual "Don't put a story in Loving Wives after the first episode was in another category". The LW commentariat is a parochial bunch which doesn't venture far beyond the LW category.

And you received no comments at all for Ch.01 in Non-Con, so at least here you got something. The LW comments can be lots of fun, and commenters sometimes even can be helpful.

I went back and read the first chapter, then this one, simply because the comments suggested that there could be something different in your story. I think there is too, because you have your character expressing some unusual emotions and oscillating between confident behaviour and humiliation - almost seeking it?

Where you seem to be taking this story looks as though it will probably lose a lot of readers along the way (me included), but I thought it was an interesting start. A more thorough check read would help pick up a few small errors in wording (leave it lie fallow for a few days before checking and posting) but I thought it was well written.

Lue

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
A simply lesson

NEVER switch categories mid-story. It's a horrible idea. And when you go from Non-con to loving wives you're guaranteed to be bombed. This was simply awful in all phases and not in the least bit entertaining.

1 star

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