All Comments on 'Beautiful'

by NRMathis

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BlowPopJBlowPopJover 2 years ago

I cried. Beautifully written

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
Really sweet story

This was such a nice, short read. You should consider continuing their story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Beautiful indeed!

BuzzCzarBuzzCzarover 2 years ago

This transcends a single category, it's universal. Excellently done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

i teared up! so beautiful

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

What an awesome, moving, sensitive, and inspiring story. I cried and got a boner!!!!

sp9983sp9983over 2 years ago

I was expecting a story with sex, instead you write a Harleqine romance story. We readers aren't wanting romance.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I cried a lot. Wow this was a relatable and touching story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

One of the 5 best gay romance/happy endings stories on this site. Story flow and organization moving. Having the narrative slightly more grounded in Tory than Andre deepens appreciation for his story. Well done. You could edit to adjust he/him and past pluperfect-"it was after that date when he ..."

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Came for horny, stayed for wholesome, ended up crying. 100/10

GaylmahGaylmahover 2 years ago

Extraordinary ! I usually come here to read sex-centred stories but I have been engulfed by yours. This was really sweet and educational. Great writing and structure.

Hutchison12Hutchison12about 2 years ago

What a fantastic story, someone very dear to me has suffered the same battle. So accurately written, I hope your inspiration is better now, a beautifully written story.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Beautiful about covers it! - everything about this story is just that.

What a talented writer - thank you for creating and posting

Calico75Calico752 months ago

An excellent depiction of a recovering addict. Controlling food in a healthy but appropriate manner is very difficult for many of us. Well written.

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