All Comments on 'Beautiful Body'

by FemFreak

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

It’s a bit jarring to have him read a tomb, I think you mean tome as in book. Otherwise it’s clear and entertaining.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Super story! You have to respect a goddess that knows how to take advantage of someone, in many ways. Here’s to looking for more like this.

_polymorphic_polymorphic4 months ago

Oh goodness, this is marvelous. I do hope you find time to continue it :)

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