All Comments on 'Beautiful Girls Likes Naughty Boys'

Loved your story. It is true to life. So many people feel they can take care of there own selfesh needs without consequinces, and can't understand why anyone should be so upset when they are found out. Keep up the good work, I am allready looking forwad to your next story.

this is the most stupid story

so thanks for your new story. I think it's quite near reality that cheating spouses get a second chance but seldom a third. That creates a lot of patchwork families. Just keep on with your good work here.

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Scandinavian culture is different from the USA. They feel that divorcing someone and simply making a public statement about why satisfies the Consequences issue. One commentator

below feels that this wimpish. I would not recommend that he tell a Scandinavian that he is a wimp!

The thing here that left me wondering is why did Rebekah reject the idea of a divorce so strongly and even insist on his making love to her? And there is the question of her insisting on lieing. She does sound a bit screwed up...

TOO SILLY

And it is worth it. Always an interesting twist with the cultural differences in these types of stories from this author.

Please do everyone a favour and go and get English lessons before you attempt to write a story on this site. You have been told before so listen to the advice and once you can write in "normal" English try again.

Hey "Anonymous in Ireland", why don't you take your prejudices out the door and leave. What makes Winterfrog fun to read is that he does show a different culture and with the way he writes it's obvious that it's someone who's not a pretender, but a real person. To slam a writer because he doesn't handle the english language the way you think he shoud is just petty and rude. But I guess you Irish have a long history of not being able to behave civilly with others.

Winterfrog's stories (usually) put a big smile on my face; this one did too.

I guess dogs are really man's best friend, after all.

Boyd

i REALLY LOVED THE DOG TOO. DOGS ARE SUCH GOOD JUDGES OF A MAN'S CHARACTER. TOO BAD REBEKA WASN'T NYMINUS

I am not into silly games so all the game playing herein would not be me. However, destroy the cheaters reputation, that I could and would do.

Winter Frog, I very much enjoy your stories. Your less than perfect English adds a very much appreciated touch of reality. Please do NOT change your words or sentence structure.

I cannot think how an "editor" could have improved on this very wellthoughtout and writen story. Especially, I like that you keep the story "culturally correct" to your country of origen. Americans are so arrogant and not a little snobish when one suggest that you write more like an american. Be yourself. Project that in your stories and forget about editors that keep your stories to themselves and out of the public domain where I can enjoy them. KEEP UP THE GOD WORK and CHANGE NOTHING. Realdoc

Winterfrog's tale of the tragic end of the marriage of Lucas(Bandido) and Rebecka is very enlightening.Rarely is the reader presented with so much backround information that gives a glimpse into the motivations behind the character's behavior.Such attention to detail allows the reader to have empathy for the characters as they confront their problems.The in depth soul searching that Lucas experiences transcends our different cultures to arrive at a universal truth that once the ties that binds a marriage are loosened; there is nothing to stop it from rending asunder.Obviously, it would be impossible to dissect the entire work in this format;however,we can agree that this is another superlative work by Winterfrog! Ritterburg # 55

Well done WF. Your stories give a wider perspective to this genre. As someone else mentioned your English gives authenticity.

I apologise for the ill manners of my countryman. Please keep writing.

Hey Winterfrog, tell me: You write your stories and says to your wife:"Woman, if you strays, i´ll do it like in my tales...".I believe she will never be tempt to stray...

Winterfrog stories have their charm because of the language. An editor would probably spoil them. I have read and enjoyed most of your tales. The Scandinavian slant makes them more interesting. Don't change that. I enjoyed this one. Keep them coming. Paul

It's hard to believe all these stories today are about the same thing, sex and people. The way we believe and live and our morals are the difference. Love your stories, no fucking fag cockolds here, Thanks!

Keep writing stories like this.

all good WF stories feature the damn pussy hounds and gigolos getting their balls kicked, this story failed

For god's sake, they appear to be nearly illiterate. If you cannot speak or write in English, then DON'T !!!!

The "story" don't make any sense most of the time. It is like 5 y.o trying to write. Definite 1 !!!

You are covering each and every plot used by others, but doing it your way. I love it! I really don't understand why some of these readers read them if they hate them so much.

I don't find the story realistic. The truth is that Rebecka wouldn't have dated him; let alone marry him. And, if she had of, she would be divorcing him for someone better and he would have been begging her not to divorce him.

The primise of the title is not valid. Beautiful girls fuck good looking, popular hot guys. They are the so called bad boys because, for them, women are easy so they find beautiful girls, fuck them, and then dump them for the next pretty girl.

DWdipshit takes it in the ass like a rampant cock-hungry pedo should - the only reality for that dipshit is getting pumped full of jizz every day

DWdipshit takes it in the ass like a rampant cock-hungry pedo should - the only reality for that dipshit is getting pumped full of jizz every day

i like you work and can even understand you english. I think becuse you have been writing a long time . you can go deeper into relationships and why women and men cheat. there are consequence to cheating in most cases. why get marriwed if you need another partner. get a seperation or divorce before the other party suffers an in grievous harm

are usually paid well and promoted beyond their abilities tho some are smart enough to stay at a level they can succeed at.

This is a very good story but no revenge at all against the betraying wife? Humiliation at the party was all she got and she got over that pretty good then found a good man. I would like for her to have been hurt some way, not permanently but hurt in spirit or in physical actions.

it is a WF story - not always revenge but always a good read. 5

But not enough punishment against the cheating wife. She shouldn't have had a happy ending.

Damn

are subtle as a well aimed rock.

betrayed, bfree, the retinue of closet-fucking cucks squealing like stuck pigs, probably squealing like spit-roasted pigs, just another day in LW - goddamn cocksmokers ruining a WF tale with their shiny bitching "not enough revenge, waah, waah"

Fucking pussies.

It takes a courageous person to write American English erotic stories in a non-native language. How many American anons out there want to write such a story in Hungarian or Gaelic, or Swedish, Norwegian, or Danish?

And as pointed out below, these countries Are Not America, and have different cultures.

Bravo Winterfrog!

Here in Texas, we say cojones - big brass ones. I've enjoyed your stories for a while. Good job. I like the different viewpoint from another culture.

Get an editor... you are too good to let grammar hold your stories down

Five stars for this one. Don't worry about your grammar because its still not that hard to follow your story. Because educated people can understand what it is your trying to say. This was a really good story even if there some minor imperfections with your wording.

The only thing worse than special comment Olympics and comments about grammar is a cheater's excuses. Holy dumb fuck, there's a story here! I would be a bit disappointed if I wrote a story and most of my comments were about grammar. And maybe do something about it.

And the most remarkable part was the dinner scene. I like how he had the balls to say what he said. I think the character felt worse than he should have, but whatever. It was noteworthy that the main character noted that he had presented divorce as an option years ago. There isn't much insight into power dynamics, other than 1) she took control over the majority of the relationship by not sharing enough responsibility 1.5) maintained separate finances 1.75) probably other things I forgot 2) she cheated. There's high correlation between the woman, power, and cheating. Is it correlation without causation? Is it endemic or cultural? Probably endemic causative.

Nice story. I'll even vote 4 stars. Well, I usually don't vote and it's good but not spectacular. So it's fair. Good story.

I told him that it was out of question, that she was a serial cheater who took joy in fucking around and I would never take her back

I've read a lot of Winterfrog's work and really enjoy his plots. I must admit that I've never had the opportunity of reading stories with a Norwegian accent before and some sequences can be challenging but still fun.

Why would a rich guy,who could probably have his pick of women,marry a cheating wife,if she as cheated once she will do it again.?

You write pretty decent stories, but the cheaters are handled much too gently for.my taste.

Weak story poorly written.

I understand English is not your native tongue, so I adapt to your written idiosyncrasies. Your sentences are clear, your plot is strong, and your good plot twists are well appreciated!

Keep up the good work!

I second john_sixfooter's comment.

Not as good as the rest

Not a bad story but would have been better if the writer could get a proofreader or editor with English as a first language.

Another story spoilt by poor English.