All Comments on 'Beautiful Honesty Pt. 01'

Wonderfully written, I almost feel as if Ben massaged me too.

Years ago I had a massage by a man, (that was a first for me) he was tall & came across asexual. He used his height for leverage. When he massaged my hands I was shocked, the sensations nearly made me orgasm, I sighed. It was a surprise & so enjoyable.

Looking forward to more Zoe & Ben.

Beautiful !!!

Extremely well written. 5*

Simply amazing can't wait for more

A nicely paced, beautifully written romance story that obviously needs to be continued. The chapter is obviously inconclusive, and the whole scene is left unfinished.

Well, fuck. I've been toying with a massage scene in my head, and you gave me a master class! I really, really am rooting for these two, and can't wait to see how you get us there. Many thanks and 5*

Seduction begins with a scalp massage! Love it, great romantic interlude. Looking forward to Chapter 2, well done 5*

Good story!

4

One of the better stories I've read about friends transitioning into lovers. Can't wait to see how their friends react, probably say "it's about damn time!" 5*

Measured, lush, sensual descriptions--slow, soft, steady, and, building in intensity-- lull the reader into a sort of blissful trance, It's a beautiful 5 * story.

Beautiful! 5 + stars. Looking forward to the next installment.

I enjoyed your story alot--friends really do make the best lovers! 5* reading, for sure!

As always, loved it from beginning to end. You build your characters and anticipation wonderfully. I wish Ben was my masseuse.

I look forward to the next chapter

You write passion well. Limited dialogue with a steadily rising desire. Thanks for the read.

Freaking great!

Fantastic read, looking forward to many chapters please!

Lovely build up and it flows beautifully. Romantic erotica at it's best.

Brilliant writing. I hardly ever comment, despite reading romance stories on here for years, and your description and pacing of the sex was amongst the best I have ever read, if not /the/ best. Well done. Looking forward to part 2!

You earned a new follower!

Your story carrying Ben and Zoe taxied, took off and then soared! The story utilized very smooth transitions to establish their relationship and it timed releasing the information at such perfect intervals that it never compromised the reading flow nor would make a reader question why one would read such a part at a certain time. Case in point: my reading experience here dictates most authors would have needed 5 pages to establish what you did in 3; not only do you write efficiently, you vary your syntax and verbs to effectively express to us exactly what they feel and you carry us along on the same waves of emotion. To be direct (like Zoe would be): I easily put this work up against the best authors here and daresay I'd be shocked if any objective readers found a single relevant issue with any of this. Superbly done! 5

Smoking hot, indeed!

5

The emotion in this story is amazing. Gave me all sorts of feels. Just beautiful.

Such a beautiful story of love and erotica. You have a true gift of describing Souls coupling rather than just bodies. Thank you for your beautiful writing. Please keep giving us these beautiful stories.

Pure enjoyment when reading this. Beautiful and sensual interaction. Story and writing have a lovely smooth flow. Thank you for this one! On to part 2!!

Such a slow, intense, simmering build up. Thank you for your efforts. Such a turn on.

most beautiful reading I have ever encountered here, fantastic command of description whole new meaning to slow burn wonderful conception

A magic world created by a magic sorcerer. Simply delicious.

You are a phenomenal writer, and I LOVE the dynamic of these characters. It's perfect. On my way to read part two!