by Gweall
Lately most of everyone else's stories haven't made sense, but this one flows perfectly and I look forward to reading the rest of it.
I remember reading this before. I loved it then and again I am enjoying it, though it is sad about what happened to Cormac
Nice beginning....grabs your attention. Wounded, haunted souls always tug at a heart.
Cormac is so alienated and angry. A healing is in order. You are pacing nicely and I look forward to the next layer of this story. There's something universal about soul suffering.
Even though I think I know where this is going --- I look foreward to seeing it in Print. It is a work of art...
First a male Cinderella now an all male beauty and the beast...let the reign of the Disney princes begin. Loved it
I was wondering whether anyone would ever do a Beauty and the Beast gay male story. Gweall, you have made me somewhat close to happy.
:D
Anyways, keep up the pacing. Also, Cormac has happy memories right? Don't just focus on the negative aspects of his past. That gets old fast.
The writing on this is just outstanding. I absolutely love what you're doing with this story! :) Keep up the great work!
I forgot how great your stories were until I started reading this one again. Thanks for posting this one again!
Like frankenstein monster, guy in the wheelchair from hannibal, or just a guy with a huge scar on his face? I doubt the scar would make him look that fugly. Good story though :)
This is a great story. Just wondering about a few things. 1) what did Cormac see in Charlie, who seems like a psychopathic asshole of the worst order? But surely there is more to their backstory. 2) what happened to Charlie for his crime? It hasn’t been mentioned yet but I hope he’s rotting away in a cell being wildly tortured and scarred by his fellow inmates. 3) how old is Aiden? I think it says he is currently 5 years old but that can’t be right. He’s wandering about with his friends at midnight, gets grounded from his video games like a teen would, and argues about being big enough to stay by himself without a sitter. Nothing about him seems like a 5-year old.