All Comments on 'Beauty and the Beast Ch. 01'

by Gweall

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I love this story!

Lately most of everyone else's stories haven't made sense, but this one flows perfectly and I look forward to reading the rest of it.

lonesomedove66lonesomedove66over 10 years ago
Is this a resubmission

I remember reading this before. I loved it then and again I am enjoying it, though it is sad about what happened to Cormac

FA_JFFA_JFover 10 years ago

Well written story with engaging characters. Look forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Can,t wait for the next chapter

Alpha_MarmAlpha_Marmover 10 years ago
Wounded...heart rending

Nice beginning....grabs your attention. Wounded, haunted souls always tug at a heart.

Cormac is so alienated and angry. A healing is in order. You are pacing nicely and I look forward to the next layer of this story. There's something universal about soul suffering.

JoyStick56JoyStick56over 10 years ago
Wonderful

Even though I think I know where this is going --- I look foreward to seeing it in Print. It is a work of art...

sheanna23sheanna23over 10 years ago
bring on the disney princes

First a male Cinderella now an all male beauty and the beast...let the reign of the Disney princes begin. Loved it

tac_naynwafflestac_naynwafflesover 10 years ago
Gay male disney princesses!!!!!

I was wondering whether anyone would ever do a Beauty and the Beast gay male story. Gweall, you have made me somewhat close to happy.

:D

Anyways, keep up the pacing. Also, Cormac has happy memories right? Don't just focus on the negative aspects of his past. That gets old fast.

roninbearroninbearover 10 years ago
Wow!

The writing on this is just outstanding. I absolutely love what you're doing with this story! :) Keep up the great work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Just as wonderful the second time!!

I forgot how great your stories were until I started reading this one again. Thanks for posting this one again!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
how bad does cormac look

Like frankenstein monster, guy in the wheelchair from hannibal, or just a guy with a huge scar on his face? I doubt the scar would make him look that fugly. Good story though :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This is a great story. Just wondering about a few things. 1) what did Cormac see in Charlie, who seems like a psychopathic asshole of the worst order? But surely there is more to their backstory. 2) what happened to Charlie for his crime? It hasn’t been mentioned yet but I hope he’s rotting away in a cell being wildly tortured and scarred by his fellow inmates. 3) how old is Aiden? I think it says he is currently 5 years old but that can’t be right. He’s wandering about with his friends at midnight, gets grounded from his video games like a teen would, and argues about being big enough to stay by himself without a sitter. Nothing about him seems like a 5-year old.

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