by Gweall
This is a great story. Just wondering about a few things. 1) what did Cormac see in Charlie, who seems like a psychopathic asshole of the worst order? But surely there is more to their backstory. 2) what happened to Charlie for his crime? It hasn’t been mentioned yet but I hope he’s rotting away in a cell being wildly tortured and scarred by his fellow inmates. 3) how old is Aiden? I think it says he is currently 5 years old but that can’t be right. He’s wandering about with his friends at midnight, gets grounded from his video games like a teen would, and argues about being big enough to stay by himself without a sitter. Nothing about him seems like a 5-year old.
Like frankenstein monster, guy in the wheelchair from hannibal, or just a guy with a huge scar on his face? I doubt the scar would make him look that fugly. Good story though :)
I forgot how great your stories were until I started reading this one again. Thanks for posting this one again!
The writing on this is just outstanding. I absolutely love what you're doing with this story! :) Keep up the great work!
I was wondering whether anyone would ever do a Beauty and the Beast gay male story. Gweall, you have made me somewhat close to happy.
:D
Anyways, keep up the pacing. Also, Cormac has happy memories right? Don't just focus on the negative aspects of his past. That gets old fast.
First a male Cinderella now an all male beauty and the beast...let the reign of the Disney princes begin. Loved it
Even though I think I know where this is going --- I look foreward to seeing it in Print. It is a work of art...
Nice beginning....grabs your attention. Wounded, haunted souls always tug at a heart.
Cormac is so alienated and angry. A healing is in order. You are pacing nicely and I look forward to the next layer of this story. There's something universal about soul suffering.
I remember reading this before. I loved it then and again I am enjoying it, though it is sad about what happened to Cormac
Lately most of everyone else's stories haven't made sense, but this one flows perfectly and I look forward to reading the rest of it.