All Comments on 'Beauty and the Brute'

What an awesome story. Very hot and hope there is more.

Great story, well written, funny and very reliable. Now, give us more!

This story has no business being this cute and fluffy. I came here to get off and now I’m feeling things! Seriously though, I loved it.

Oh and hot! It was just a really great story. Thank you

Well written, great story... It does leave you wanting more

Love Cam's thickly haired chest and big cock. What a man! What a beauty and brute of a man! How tender is his loving of Ari!

You wouldn't know I took nearly a week to enjoy the whole article.

Great story!!

Damn ... That was awesome. More please! And can we get more Tui perspective? He's damn funny

Everything about this was perfect. So perfect I'd love a sequel but I take what I get chile

Actually the funniest story I've read here. I had to laugh out loud at so many parts. Tui in particular was great, but too bad he only shows up at the end. And I also love stories that flip the POVs.

You're a great writer, even though I have some difficulties during dialogues and can't always tell who is talking. Not in this one though.

This is gonna be one I will re-read multiple times, I can tell you that much. Not even for the sex just for the characters.

Love your writing and adore all the characters 💕

Thanks for the story! You’ve gotten me into Bongzilla, and I don’t know how to feel about that :)

Another great story but I do find the flipping POVs distracting was I have to always try to visualize who is talking and without enough clues in the paragraph I find myself back reading a lot. Very cute story though.

Oh I really want to read about Cam finally fucking the life out of Ari with his huge cock! Is there a Chapter 2? Loved this story and these two together. Also love that Tui realized they were great together and supported them. Nice work.

Fantastic!

Great read, it was so fukin ovbious the two were into each other and I too wanted to read more about Cam's big dick entering Ari.

It was a turn off as soon as I read that cam was the bottom. I don’t like the mental picture of a slim slender man fu¢king a big Thor looking brute. It’s a total turn off. So I stopped reading. You have a wonderful writing style but I’ll move on to another story. If you have the stereotype of top and bottom I’ll read that one. You’re an awesome writer.

Love your stories!😍✨❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥 So happy I found you through a ”best story you’ve ever read on Literotica” thread in the forum, they recomended ”Want You to Want Me” fuckin great!🥰

This was so good^^ and thanks for some new music tips haha, you’ve recommended som e other stuff through reading some of your stories before which is always fun. Listened to Bongzillas whole Gateway album and then the song “Greenthumb” back to back with Nocturnal Depression’s song “Elégie” over and over yesterday, today my necks stiff, so thanks☺️❤️

Lovely story! I have read several of your stories now, and one unimportant detail I've noticed is your characters roll their eyes a lot! Maybe you could cut down on that. I know it is fiction, but I can't believe that even fictional characters roll their eyes that much. Lots of writers have phrases they use a lot and that's okay. My other constructive criticism is that I have trouble figuring out whch character is speaking at times. Just some thoughts. Great stories! Well written.