All Comments on 'Beauty in the Dissonance Ch. 01'

don't know what the others think they read but this was typical gabage for this site

The way the two just collided with each other like two runaway trains was great. So grateful that Part 2 is up and ready to read - Great job - as always - Stardog!

What an amazing erotic story, can't wait to read part 2

First, your writing talent is superb. This was an excellently writen and highly erotic story.

The problem for me is that this story seems caught between a chance for redemption/ fulfillment, and a train wreck waiting to happen.

I hope I don't regret it, but I'm gonna read Ch. 2.

This is the best, most readable and infinitely most believable story, in this genre, that I have ever read. Keep on writing.

JamesMorrison

this is an awesome story. you are very, very good!!!

can't wait................fresh..........

Excellent reading.