All Comments on 'Beauty in the Dissonance Ch. 02'

It's just getting good! Kyle needs to knock up Nina!

As with the last chapter, your writing skilz are first-rate.

This seems like a story about a guy who escaped a trap (as you mentioned in the first chapter) only to get caught up in it later. It's a good plot device and an entertaining, if sad, story - if you're into that sort of thing.

I'm not, so I won't be reading any more chapters. No reflection on your skill, though. I wish you continued success, and ever higher ratings.

Very interesting. Love the unique twists in this adventure. Might we expect a third part perhaps?

There's no such word; the past tense of 'grind' is 'ground'; get a dictionary...

IDIOT do you even know what a womb is you fool???