All Comments on 'Beauty--Remastered Ch. 02'

by almostluver

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fairy14fairy14almost 13 years ago
UGH!!!

Please update soon!!!

trinisamplertrinisampleralmost 13 years ago
great!

i love the direction that this story is going...keep it up and please don't make us wait too long!!

amber1312amber1312almost 13 years ago
good

start, cant wait for the next chapter.

PennLadyPennLadyalmost 13 years ago
I like Scarlet

And her strength, but I don't like:

"his unapologetic domineering attitude pissed her off beyond belief. But still...it was *hot*."

Sorry, guess just too many stories of strong women falling for jerky alpha males and finding the jerky qualities attractive..

The writing is good, though. Few mistakes, if any, decently paced, and things like that. Hope you keep going and finish.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Love it

I'm really liking where the story is heading. I tend to like female dom, but this male dom is nice. Please continue the story. Id love to see how it all ends.

pleasureseeker5pleasureseeker5about 12 years ago
I agree with Pennlady

The guy is a domineering bastard who is already treating her like crap. She didn't agree to a "taken in hand" marriage--he has no right to hit her. I don't get how people find this kind of jerk attractive. A strong man in the bedroom is one thing, but one who hits his woman as "punishment" without her permission is an abuser.

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