by Tiffanyjones
he was hard.the hell with it.jump him&screw the hell out of him.put your legs&arms around him&yell you are not leaving me again.scream lets fuck.
Thankyou for this story, and as I've read some very derogatory and negative comments, I must express my thanks for the time and effort that you have shown. I know that I would be hopeless writing, but at least, you have fed your passion.
Wonder why all negative comments are made by people that wish to show their true colours, and surely they have submitted works themselves on here, just to show everyone what a masterpiece they can write, huh?
I look forward to reading more from you, and, thankyou again and well done x
Becci was Made for Sex Ch. 02 can be found under the Erotic Couplings section. More parts to this story will follow. - Tiffany
Finally, an educated writer. Great start but needs another chapter, he has to fuck her brains out.
since I have not much time, it took 2 days to read the complete story. on day one I enjoyed and had masturbated :p but the story ended abruptly, without any ...........
spoiled the interest :-(
This story. I think when she gets up in the morning she should greet her father totally naked. After all, the line of propriety has already been crossed. Now she needs to let him know, in no uncertain terms, that she's horny, willing and able.
Good job!
But it has remnants of another similar story in some ways although I cant recall the name or author . Still worth reading and worth carrying on with.