All Comments on 'Becky and Her Mom Ch. 01'

Loved it! Can't wait for chapter two!

Yes more! Please finish it.

Hope you find the time to finish it. I love your stories

Perfect amount of buildup. Especially liked description of bodies. Nice progression of erotic events. Mom coming in at the end is perfect.

I loved it please write the next part soon

I had no idea how much I missed your content. Don't burn yourself out, but please post the next one soon!

I love it! I hope that big tittied milf gets it next. Then mommy dauighter pregnancies!

I usually don't post comments on stories that aren't my own, but before I read this - just wanted to tell you that your style of writing played a huge part in what I find erotic. Everything is so unrealistic, but the fantasy of what you write is so...fucking...hot. The dirty talk is so imaginative and filthy. Writers should be taking notes!

It has been quite a while since we had a new story from you! Don't make us wait so long for the next installment! I always enjoy your stories although, since I can be a bit selfish, I'd like to see you branch out and stretch your creativity! Thanks!

to quick an ending, wanted a little more to story, involving mom a bit more.

Thanks for all the comments! Hoping to get another chapter up in the next week or two.

As usual, your stories are incredibly unrealistic, and incredibly hot. Good to see you writing again. I loved all of your stories thus far, and this one is no exception. A little short, but an erotic read, and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Great to see you back, I love your stories!

I really enjoy your writing so I wish this story was longer

I would have loved more of her in your story but... bring in the next chapter please!

More, please! Great and very hot!

If Becky is short and petite and looking up to Brian, how are her breasts squashed against his chest and "up to his face"? The story eould be much better if these details were credible. If a 5ft woman with huge breasts (therefore hanging at HER chest and below) pushes her body into a 6ft guy, her breasts push into his abdomen and his erection not into her tummy but into the underside of her boobs. Remember, if they're a foot apart, her crotch is also approx. a half foot below his. Fantasy is good, but even better if it remains within the potentially realistic realm.

so i dont expect a reply as im viewing this story long after it was published but it sure would have been nice to have some exposition as to why he didn't think she knew he existed. i mean yes clearly we are led to imagine that shes popular, he's not but context would have been nice.