All Comments on 'Becky Charlotte Waters: My First Blowjob'

Lovely story of blossoming young love with excellent descriptive eroticism. Any chance of a follow-up? I'd love to read the tale of their first fuck...

A taunt upsets your opponent. A young breast is taut.

This struck home with me, and I loved it! Loved the tease from Becky, and the detail of her, along with the build up of tension during the "friendly dinner and a movie" great story!

Very good. Certainly for a first story. Keep going.

This was a very good story and it is very dissappointing that it did not continue. Hope to see one soon.

Great story, hope you’ll be inspired to write again.

5 Stars. Wonderful story, totally believable and caring. Sounded like Becky had been waiting for quite a while for Charlie to come around. You are a very talented writer, one more chapter please, they're obviously made for each other.

As if I was there. Great story. More maybe?