All Comments on 'Becky the Busty Babysitter Ch. 02'

by mrddman

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amfanonamfanonover 5 years ago
Repeat of chapter one

This is literally a repeat of chapter one in all but a few parts.

mrddmanmrddmanover 5 years agoAuthor
Read Chapter 3

Chapter 1 and 2 are just slow buildup to Chapter 3

mrddmanmrddmanover 5 years agoAuthor
Read onward

Chapters 1 and 2 are just a buildup to Chapter 3. Hope you enjoy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Chapter 2 is repeat

Chapter 2 apparently is the SAME as Page 2 of Chapter 1

mrddmanmrddmanover 4 years agoAuthor
Text is being edited

Sorry I forgot to delete chapter 2 from the tail end of chapter 1. It's in process of getting edited. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

It's amazing how rapidly believability disappears when a beautiful woman uses an exact random word that the author has previously used several times to describe her own breasts.

"I'll bet you like my big jutting tits! Don't you Tommy."

Uh huh. The dialogue could obviously use a major overhaul. Otherwise it's pretty sexy fun.

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