All Comments on 'Becky's Seduction'

It's just terrific, I dont even have words for this story. Just perfect.

I sincerely hope this story wins.

This is one of the best stories on the site. You are a very good writer, and I was impressed also with your command of English grammar and metaphor. Keep writing. And spruce up your profile...

This girl is hot!!! Strokus maximus! Great sex and a real love story too; what more do you need? Keeps it going all the way. Deserves to win, and this is a good field.

really loved this story, easy reading yet so erotic

Made me remember the love that I made to the best woman in my life. Always wondered how a woman feels when she is properly loved but I found some of the answers in this story. Thank you Becky or sheba or whoever you are - You deserve to win for bringing out the difference between sex and making love.

Wow is all I can say... truly exceptional love story. Good luck with this I hope you win!

A totally romantic story. So detailed and sexy. My only complaint is that it was too long but I'm picky. Good luck in the contest.

Superbly romantic. A little long for my taste, but then that's a personal thing and no reflection on your writing, which is very good. 5 stars.

Very hot and still lovingly written

Brought a tear to my eyes in the end. Love love a good love story. Keep up the good work.

One of the best I've read anywhere! Very well written,great description and good characterization. Well done!

This should be a series best story I've read

Well worth the wait. Mills and Boon with more

I'm not at all sure why, but I couldn't help thinking she's black and he's white...no real reason. But the best story. Ever. Thanks.

Horribly unrealistic.

To the naysayers- it's called FICTION for a reason. Unrealistic? Yeah, who cares. This is a love story. Read the emotions of this woman between the lines of the sex. Feel the guy's emotions through his actions.

Plus, it's great writing, I was anxious for him to say it, too.

Stories are meant to entertain, to be enjoyed and sometimes they require "the willing suspension of disbelief" (I forget who said that about fiction but it stands true).

Thank you for a wonderful read.

This is a Romance story, not an Erotic Couplings story. As such, it is beautifully written, tender, loving, a story that tugs at the heartstrings. With a fine plot enhanced by love scenes that do not dominate it and are never tedious, this is Romance writing at its best.