All Comments on 'Becoming a Bridesmaid Pt. 02'

Great story again thank you. I really like the Lou Character, I imagine her going around locking up lots of little cocks.

I loved it! Hope there is still more to the story and otherwise I cannot wait to more stories like this.

Xx Annabel

Keep on writing. Your story telling is very enticing!

a real cock is so much better

Wow just an amazing series. Thank you so much for writing!

Loved part one, hated part two. I thought she was going to end up with Lou and instead you went comp het and turned her straight. I also didn't care for how she losses all say in how her life goes but seems fine with it.

i still cant believe for somebody who hasn't done this before that you are not rebelling more

it's one thing to start crossdressing but it's another to start craving cock for somebody who hasn't done this before and to get feminized overnight and stay that way i call bs

I have to agree with a couple of reviewers here in that Ashley's shift in thinking is very, very unrealistic, and really takes away from the story. Loved part one, but part two is like every other crap story on here about trans people that makes us seem like fetish objects. Meh, at best.

Loved part one….hated part two.

Same reasons as other people. Two months in drag and suddenly he is gay? Nah. Much better story when the focus was him and Lou.

I really enjoy your pace of writing, I find other stories rushed but you seem to take enough time. I would have preferred more confusion over the gay urges, maybe more questioning on the sexuality front before getting to that end point but as a chastised sub myself I get it. Personally I find women attractive and am drawn to them, but have me in a dress and locked long enough if a man comes on to me I'd act on it too.

Hope you keep writing.

would like to see a chapter 3... so good...

I agree we need a Chapter 3 of this. some best I have read

This was amazing! I’m sure we would all love a part 3 to this

I really enjoyed this story. Once Julie convincingly had Ashley converted to feminine attire only, I’m surprised that all these women hadn’t unexpectedly tricked Ashley into taking hormone pills since he’s so gaullible .

I wold have given your story a 5 except for the cage. It quite ruined the erotica of the story and other then Bridesmaid I will not read or rate your stories as I know they are not to my tastes.

Fantastic story

There's no way that Lou should pass the key on to Jamie without finding out if they wanted the cage remove she was conniving and not very good and shoot God Jamie too have sex with her that is wrong totally wrong I disliked it all together thank you

Great story. Would be great to become who you always should have been. To be loved and accepted

This was really hot but I didn’t like the cishet normativity, one can absolutely be a woman without being with a man. Giving the key to a guy without asking for consent was also particularly fucked up. So yeah, no. It’d have been way hotter if the main character actually had sex with her boss, even if the cage stays.

Think I typed a note once before. Love the store now that Jamie has the key leaves the door open for a third chapter. Please