by Kinkybottomwhore
Needs TW for piss. You've got promise with your writing, but immediately lost my boner as soon as the piss came up.
This is seriously hot. I guess I have a sixth sense that allows me to anticipate piss and skim read ahead. I’m very happy that you’ve written this. I’m excited to see what you wrote next
Just to be contrarian: the piss was the best part!
I enjoyed this, it was pretty good, but it escalated a bit quickly for my liking. It has a surprising amount in common with some of my abduction fantasies as a trans guy. Nice job :)
found it a little odd willing to rape the person but still respecting the preferred gender pronouns?