All Comments on 'Becoming a Unicorn?'

A story that is honest and realistic, and all the better for that. At the same time, the characters are well drawn and the sex scenes are articulately described and believable.

A story that takes a few turns and I especially liked the conversations between women talking about sex - a turn on for me. And I loved the way you described how you were fucked - another big turn-on.

You know who I am so I'll say more face to face. That will be even more titillating.

It's quite rare but sometimes I find a line in a story that just does it for me. This story had one of those lines: "Just as much, it was the thought that this same cock had just fucked Hanna to an orgasm." I can't explain it but there you go. Anyway, I loved the story and it is a definite 5 from me.