All Comments on 'Becoming a Webstar Ch. 03'

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huntsman29huntsman29over 6 years ago
Reasonable idea. Terrible break points.

It's a fair idea, but it drags quite a lot and the break point at the end of this one is terrible place to leave a story. Upload later when it's at a good point, not a porn scene half way through.

liz33ndliz33ndabout 6 years ago
cool story

not the best, but the best I have read for awhile. good job.

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