All Comments on 'Becoming a Whore 01'

A whore is born.

I see trouble on the horizon for this marriage. The Wife is a liar, won't tell the truth to her hubby, hides her secret turn-on's, wants to be a street whore, does all kinds of stuff behind hubby's back. No Way, Marriage is over unless she starts tell hubby the truth and it don't look like she is about to start doing the one thing that would save her marriage.

Interesting

Crap story. Don NOT read! Pure stupidity and clearly headed in an all-out cuckold direction. Even husbands with bitchy wives are not going to accept their wife being arrested for prostitution and showing up dressed in hooker clothes which she changed into after leaving the house. Wife claims she was drugged and under the influence but refuses to take a blood test. (By the way, in US her statement that she was drugged would allow cops to get a search warrant to take a blood test. Typically in a case where a woman claimed o be involuntarily drugged the cops would insist on a drug test and get a warrant if necessary). This is going to be a cesspool.

Utter crap. As if any man who actually has some self respect, will just accept the slut wife's non-explanation. Totally ridiculous.

Street slags don't look good; neither does this stupid 'story'.

I admit I read your story rather quickly. So maybe I missed the creative element that revealed why it was a good idea to craft the male character as a thoroughly unlikely -- and disliked -- moron on the First Order. Perhaps a re-write will explain that -- and all the rest.

The police procedural stuff is all wrong, but the story idea is really intriguing and the dynamic with the wife perfectly real. I’m a fan of some cheat/cuck stuff, so that helps.

A very disturbing story for many reasons. I have looked at several of your stories and they have similar themes. The conservative wife developes a sudden fascination with prostitution and then starts acting it out and refuses to discuss anything about it with her husband. In the introduction to this story you indicate that you wish it was true. All I can think is that you must really hate these people, whoever they are.