All Comments on 'Becoming a Whore 05'

Excellent

This is problematic for a number of reasons: safety, familial relationships, sexual health.

Women with multiple unprotected sex partners have a higher rate of yeast infections, UTI’s, cervical cancer from HPV, not to mention STD’s.

The emotional toll this takes as your dignity and ability to say no has been taken away from you. Servicing clients in your own home without relegated for your family and then a husband who gets off on your degradation and has no respect for you.

My mom was whore. I can tell you the bruises she suffered, the broken teeth, cracked ribs, the drugs and alcohol to numb the pain, the crying, the mental hospitals, being apprehended by CPS. I can tell you how 10 year old me has to testify in court about what I saw and heard.

Home should be a place of semi normalcy, safety and to have it taken from you robs you of that little bit of yourself.

You want advice? Stop making the husband delight in her humiliation and degradation. That isn’t what you do with someone you love, that’s something you do to someone you hate.

Establish ground rules: she might be a whore but her home is sacrosanct. Condoms are a MUST! Getting cancer or a stinky yeast infection or a pregnancy that ends in a Downs a syndrome baby because she is at that age is NOT attractive.

Finally, her husband needs to shit or get off the pot. This is his wife and he needs to man up or just divorce her but treating her like she is a piece of shit needs to stop.

I don’t care if that’s his fantasy, she’s the one who is paying the price mentally, physically and emotionally.

Finally, give her some actual emotions. She should be angry, she should be sad or depressed, let her cry even. Anything other than calm acceptance.

Mister Hammer is a cuckold.

His daughter a cuckquean

It has been two or three days since I have come across one this bad. Yikes.

I'm calling out anyone that thinks this story is good. It is pathetic, not erotic, wimpy, and definitely no realistic. Anyone that thinks this is entertaining must still be in high school or has that mentality. Author included.

Wow. This really might be the most fucked up piece of shit I've skimmed through on here. Read rhe first bit. Then bottom of 1st page. Then the end.

It was painful. The work of a delusional man with obvious mental, emotional and psychological issues.

Really really horrific. I'd seek professional help if you think this is "excellent".

Pretty filthy...but hot! She should be doing drugs in the story...needles. A complete needy addict only acts so wanton...hubby can control her that way.

I feel sorry for anyone who enjoys reading this garbage.

This one died in chapter one, and is really starting to stink.

Just love the story! So wonderfully dirty. Just hoping for one more chapter where she will be hooked on drugs as well and the daughter joins the whore business ...

On one level, I really enjoy Emily being filthy, on another it is like watching a car crash. I can't help wonder if there is a real Emily and if she is a party to telling these tales. No matter, I will stick with her until her tale is told and anxiously wait for her next installment.

a slut like her deserve more customers! 20 customers everyday! husband watch and lick the cum after the work!

Excellent. This chapter is even better than the previous one.

Great story keep going ignore the naysayers it's fiction don't revisit if you don't like it my only request going forward is kindly not include any husband humiliation parts would make the story unrealistic rather indulge in the systematic degradation of the wife by having her pimp (kasba) push her more into public gangbangs ( double anal , double vaginal , anal/vaginal fisting ) and Emily being a willing participant in the whole debauchery let the husband remain and passively involved in all this ( worried for her but still would want to see get railed and manhandled by tens of men at once with all her holes stuffed at once ) so good luck eagerly waiting for the next update

Keep it up just push the envelope make Emily a gangbang whore in the next update Claire's friend brings his friends with him and fills her up airtight and apart from it let her boss turn her into a office slut being given to clients and other business associates to have their way with her and for casba to organize gangbang sessions for his friends and clients with sole intention of turning her into a wanton slut whose only purpose in life should be to satisfy her johns no matter the number 10 ,20 30 and so on at once .

Would love to see you explore the power dynamics between the husband and casba for ex take a situation where one day the husband gets a message from Emily letting him know that she won't be home for a few days asking him not to call her with him knowing nothing about her situation then after 4 to 5 days he ends up calling casba who in turn texts him a new address asking him to come there once he reaches the said location he encounters emily getting ganged by 20 guys with casba keeping a close look on her he approaches casba who tells him about the last 5 days since his wife has been there and the number of people she has had sex with and what his end goal is with Emily trying to let mr hammer know subtly that his wife belonged to him now and he can make her do whatever he wants her to do and asks him to go home since she won't be home for another week or so and mr hammer with absolutely no power over either Emily or casba goes home and every few minutes mins casba sends him a series of pics and videos on his phone chronicling Emily's debauchery and mr hammer watching his wife getting owned by strange men should feel both dejected and aroused at the same time and after some time asking hammer to come and get his wife since she won't be able to walk for a while with her vagina as well her anus getting distended due to the constant penetration of cocks, fists and dildos and after getting Emily back home the story should be from her point of view as to why she chose to do what she did and how despite being ripped apart she loves doing what she does and letting her husband know that this is her true calling and she loves getting owned by men even though she loves him and will love him for life she needs to be treated like a piece of meat giving him a choice to either leave her or support her in her new vocation and hammer despite not being sure of her voice and a little embarrassed to know that his wife is willing to let strange men use her as sex toy to get their rocks off having the images and videos sent by casba fresh in his mind and her screams of urging her lover's to Rip her apart and to shove as many dicks as they can in her while getting manhandled by an army of men he is also excited to see how far Emily can fall in her quest to whoredome

Great entry just one request kindly make your future entries longer and more graphic

Almost there … Chris should have been pushed to lick her cunt before being let down …. Sooooo close

This rag gets more disturbing all the time. Please end it and let her die from STD's, or cucky gets fed up and slits her throat.

More graphic preg risk and more of it - let all three of them worry about it,

This is a fantastic story. Loved this part especially. I only have one gripe - and that is that the young male friend of the daughter never knocked the wife up!

You know, I just don’t get you super critical people - especially you gutless “anonymous” jerks.

If you don’t like a story then why the fuck would you waste your time continuing to read it even though you hate it??? If it doesn’t turn you on or you think it’s depraved do everyone a favour and MOVE ON.

Perhaps these hyper critics don’t get the human mind and libido. This story is a graphically extreme example of how far our desires can take us. A personal example for me would be the first time a woman told me that she likes to be spanked. “You like what?” So I spanked her quite gently at first and she wanted it more and “harder!” I was shocked because that’s not the only thing that got hard - I did! I got a raging hard on and proceeded to fuck her hard. We both loved it. Now when I get intimate with a lady for the first time I’ll give her a little slap on the ass. Unbelievably most love it and like it a little rough and dirty. Many women have told me that one of the best things that getting their sweet ass spanked hard during sex is that the next day their ass is still burning a little which seems to go right to their pussies which are wet and juicy the next day. So they need a good fucking as soon as I show up. Mmmmmm-Mmmmmm good! Another hot juicy pussy to dine on and fuck hard to our mutual satisfaction!

And ladies’ enjoyment of spanking isn’t limited to their beautifully round bottoms. Some love to have their pussies spanked too and many can cum just by having their pussy spanked. You have to be careful introducing this one to a new lady. Simply tap their lips as you play with them. Typically they will find that interesting so you can increase the tapping as they ask for it “more and harder.”

As far as this story goes, I’ve read every page and am looking forward to the next chapter. What a turn on Emily is! She obviously wanted to explore her slutty side and the initial incident with her friend exposed her to a way of exploring her dark side. I loved the way she committed to “cleaning” the other hookers well used cunts and quickly became addicted to it. What a turn on! I love eating a beautiful waxed pussy but only with the delicious female juices please! =:)

He messed up. He called her "Love." That is a mistake. You can't love a whore. It's in the definition. I think he should suffer the consequences of his mistake and divorce the whore and move 3000 miles away. Whores can't be married either. That's also in the definition. Gotta fix that mistake!

Hopefully you'll continue this. Maybe have her leave for weekend and then weeks at a time. Coming back marked, and pierced, maybe having the daughter join her mom.

Just found your profile and series. Great job I must say. Keep the chapters and stories coming. I believe that they are placed in the correct category.