All Comments on 'Becoming a Young Smoker'

I love this, I always had a thing for girls that smoked, loved the smell and taste as I kissed them. Great story

Rated a 5 on story and content. Just one criticism though - go easy on all the exclamation points.

Why the end? They need to get hooked ok heroin…

Just the end of the chapter. More to come!

Is it safe to assume you're a smoker Chloe?

I am a heavy smoker yes

This was awesome. Keep it up! I can't wait for more.

It seems some people think coughing up phlegm in the morning, having yellow teeth and fingers, wheezing, bad breath and living in a place coated in a brown film that stinks like a stale ashtray is sexy. Wow. Who knew? I smoke, wish I didn't although I have cut way down, and find none of this hot.

And yeah - knock off the !!!!!!!.

Nicely done!

Loved this story x

Great story. Who cares about the !!!! Idiots bitch about minor stuff. It’s free stories on Literotica not books from Waterstones!!!!!!!!!!!! 5*

i so agree. thanks for the comment

Great story! I saw somewhere that you said you would “love to be caned for smoking.” Perhaps someone might write that story …

I intend to write it myself soon

I love this story! It’s so scarily realistic and dirty too. It’s nearly enough to get me to start smoking, and I love the bit where the girl gets impaled against the wall by the horny boy, so cheap and so naughty. Chloe, thank you for writing it. kx

I love this history and I smoking slot of cigarettes reading

Please write the end please