All Comments on 'Becoming April'

please continue this hot story... i want more of it. it is sooooooo freaking sexy hot. i wanna suck a cock like that

My cock throbbed the entire time I was reading the story. Well written with a good cliff hanger. I want more!

I want this story to continue. I want to read about April dressing sexy, in heels, boots, leather. Maybe take another class as b/f and g/f. Just keep it going.

i loved it loved it loved it. slowly transform her so we can all see, exhibit and display her. kisses

Great story, my cock is quivering. Can't wait for Andy to get some sexy lingerie on and become the hot lady she is. I could almost taste that big cock.

When's the next part coming?

i feel like those kids waiting for the next harry potter novel. please please where is the next chapter in her becoming April. kisses, capri tv

Great story but clearly room for a part 2!

I do hope there is more coming!

You write wonderfully...but not enough! This very sexy and provocative story begs for more. And so do I. Please, please, please more!

i wish a wonderful man would find me and make me into april like in this story. please more....

love it but how long for the next chapter...please don't leave it like this... more please

So hot! I love to feel a man take control and treat me like a horny woman...play with my titties and use my mouth.

This guy needs to see a psychatrist and then take some tests for every STD under the moon. Badly done story made worse by the fact that there was no 2nd chapter.