All Comments on 'Becoming His Slave'

by Littlewyldone

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AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Great start. Not a big fan of the beatings, hopefully there won't be much of that, in this story. Wish the story would explain in a little more Depth, who master and slave were to each other. Such as wife and husband, lovers, brother and sister, father and daughter, mother and son, or just total strangers??

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When I started writing, I did it for the reader. I wanted the reader to feel my stories. As I kept writing, I realized I was writing for me, to remember... What He Finds in Me is my favorite story I've ever written.