by Quixerotic1
Great story. Well-written characters and hot sex. Best story I've read in ages!
Loved the story, the progression of events, made me feel like I’m wanting a mini movie in my head while reading this.
If I can express some of my hopeful ideas for how part 2 could play out, the pen is a mighty sword in your hands... or at least imaginative fingers on the keyboard.
Not necessarily in this order... Alex relays to Julie, now current predicament, on
another note (last night was fantastic). Letting Mark know what’s going to happen on the couch then, or after a few days when the changes start. Maybe a beginning to a bubbly romance where eventually 1 may not want to take the ring off when they can. Optional Mark name/ meanings of Alex’s... Name Lexi - defender, Name Margret - Pearl.
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Glad I refreshed the Gender Transformation tag yesterday or I might’ve not come across your story. Good luck with it and I look forward to future parts/chapters
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All your comments are very much appreciated. I'm surprised and thrilled with the response this story has gotten. Feedback is the lifeblood of authors in this genre and we love to hear it.
Loved the story. Your character development and story line was great. Loved the way you built it. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more of your stuff. Again keep up the great work!!!!
I was a bit sad that Lexi was (maybe) going to change back to Alex. You did a great job of leading us to believe that would be good for him. Then, at the end, all was well when Mark wore the ring and saw Alex. And...if you're looking for additional writing material...we still don't know what Alex's attraction will be like post-ring. What if their attractions leave them having attractions of a different Lit category?
This is a great story and I hopefully look forward to some more. You are a very talented writer.