All Comments on 'Becoming Monsters 1: Ch. 06'

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AiLoves about 2 years agoAuthor

In an earlier draft, I had the MC (would eventually become Honoka) set up a booth and the guild was more like a weird job fair. I think Zootopia influenced me a bit with this version and I love the idea of the DMV.

Anonymousabout 2 years ago

Absolutely outstanding stuff. I cant wait to read the rest.

TwistedDaveAuthor almost 2 years ago

i do like the DMV version and I just cant stop reading. Just found your stories about a week ago and have been binge reading. Never want you to stop.

HoubovyJazyk over 1 year ago

I’m hooked. You’ve hit the right blend of magical realism and I’m loving how you’re setting up this changed world.

JohnBJohn about 2 months ago

Great story!

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