All Comments on 'Becoming Monsters 1: Ch. 09'

Dun dun duuuuun!

I wonder if new chest and muscle are any good for getting off the radar of the mob pursuit. If they were, then why plan for shopping in a switched body? If not, wouldn't that really complicate delving into dungeons?

“I wonder if new chest and muscle are any good for getting off the radar of the mob pursuit.”

I was more trying for the idea that superficial changes like boobs and muscle can be seen through, but no one would expect a change of Race. In later chapters I come back to the reasoning why a change in Race is far more rare than other changes.

Should be either interrupted her sleep or peed the bed. Since if it's "Either let the succubus sleep or she would pee the mattress" those are consequences of the same action (not moving),

So it would be either move (wake her possibly) or not move (golden mattress).

The mighty Halo Approves this T Shirt.

Dabbler believes it unnecessary. 🤪

I am still loving your story, I just have one wish, not a complaint, just a wish. That the chapters were just a bit longer.

“Longer chapters?”

Originally wrote this as a novel, and so I tried to keep it 4-6k words a chapter. The second book averaged more 6-8k. Nowadays my chapters average 10-12k words.

The sex scene doesn't do anything for me, but this chapter is the pivot that gets the story moving. I'm very excited.

Why are they doing anything outside of that amazing waterproof bathroom? The inevitable clean up would be so much easier.

Having looked at so many Japanese Succubus illustrations on that certain website that Japanese artists like to use to post their illustrations, I'm going to assume that "Tail Shape Manipulation Unlocked" means the ability to shapeshift the tail into a diverse variety of forms for uses that include milking a man of him cum with a "tail pussy" (that optionally also has a tongue and/or sounding capable semen sucking tentacle inside), a needle-tipped syringe-shaped tail tip that injects aphrodisiacs or lactation inducing fluids directly into a penis or breasts, sucking the breast milk out of a woman, fucking a man or woman with a penis-shaped tail that can cum, or voring (swallowing) someone with their tail's mouth. .

Lol roflol hysterically. The ridiculously factor is off the charts..... ✨ 🌟 ⭐ 🌟 ✨ and 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂