All Comments on 'Becoming Monsters: Tidbits 11'

Really like the story and characters, please keep the chapters coming.

So is Corey normal sized, or actual raven sized? Did he give thumbs up with wings or hands?

So confusing tracking all the species and names too.

I’ll go back and clarify Corey, both in my master doc and in future chapters. I definitely didn’t do it as well as I should. He doesn’t have hands, but got lucky enough to have dexterous wingtips. He’s human sized. Think Falco Lombardi.

Looks like it’s about time to have a Cast of Characters bit at the start of a release. Will do so that future chapters are more clear.

😕 This is a little confusing, but also intriguingly amusing. (A little alliteration for the readers). Keep up the good work.

Thanks, Mr Mindblow. I wasn't sure if there were Egyptian-esk animal/human hybrids, or some other method of humanized animals.

@Timtom12

The short answer is “yes.” A third of humanity in this setting took on thousands of forms, and even people who have the same thing in the Race line of their Status Screen can look and function completely differently. A Raven Beastfolk could be like I’ve described here, a Human who happens to have a Raven head, could have arms separately from the wings, wildly different amounts of their body covered by feathers, etc.

Corey. Is that a reference to 'Twa Corbies'? Please continue!!!!!