All Comments on 'Becoming My Girlfriend's Girlfriend'

by PassionateFruit

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Single_ElizaSingle_Elizaover 4 years ago
Well written

Oh so very hot, can't wait to see if anymore cum's in this story. Made me so hot and wet well done. xoxo

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

It's a delightful story with a variety of different category aspects built in. There is a "NonConsent/Reluctance" section, a "Transgender & Crossdressers" section, "Anal" section, and finally a "First Time" section, all nicely blended together for a great erotic read. The thought of such a fast acting X-change formula as always is a terrific fantasy.

Not sure IF this story is going to lead into a series or not. With the dominant nature of Ann nearing the end of the story it could've turned another corner and entered the "BDSM" realm.

Anyway, I enjoyed reading it and hope to see other stories from you in the cuming daze. :)

DianeRedfernDianeRedfernover 4 years ago
Very hot

Your storytelling is great and I loved all of it but just a bt too quick. Now that Katherine's a girl, she should enjoy a slower hand like I do.

xoxo,

Di

4yourpleasureiam4yourpleasureiamover 4 years ago
I wish there was a drug that would do this

Now I use Lavender oil on my breasts every day and they are nice but the lavender is doing nothing to shrink my ugly dangly boys or make my clitty nicer. It is so hard to feel pretty when you have a ugly sack and those things between your legs where a nice smooth look should be. I love that you made this a love story

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