All Comments on 'Becoming The CO'

OUTSTANDING STORY, BUT WHAT ABOUT THE SISTER??? ARE THERE MORE PEOPLE??? TO ME, THIS HAS THE MAKINGS OF A MUCH LARGER STORY, AND A GREAT ONE AT THAT.

I love the story as you have developed it to this point. I have a feeling that you could develop this story more and write more plot into the story between brother and sister and son and mother. I hope you write more

I sure hope you are going to continue this story !!!!!!!!

KATIE in NEW JERSEY

Even with the living conditions being deteriorated, sex still is one of the life forces that keeps the human animal wanting to keep on living. If the whole land that you live in were to be destroyed, and you still needed to fuck, then there is hope for the human existence. A wild story and quite interesting to ponder on. I hope that you continue with the rest of the story.....Rich

Definitely continue this.

Now, give us more of the story, please!

...but the sex scene is disappointing. I want more details. Please tell me there will be more!

NO!!!!!!! Marine half finish anything. Sit down and give us more to this story. THAT IS AN ORDER!!!!!!!!!

Keep writing, you have a good idea here. If you could just flesh it out a bit more and moake it longer, it would be great.

Thanks for the submission.

This is a brilliant and highly original story of hot motherfucking. Peter is a big strong and very aggressive boy, and now is the CO of his family and of the family twats. His mother notices the big dick Peter's got bouncing around in his pants, as mothers do, and like any mother she's proud of what her son's got hanging between his legs. Mom is desperate with a mother's need for her boy's big prick--the biggest she's ever seen!--her motherly cunt drips with desire. For her, Peter's powerful cock is the symbol of her son's total authority and control and of his RIGHT to shove his cock right up his mother's twat whenever he feels like unloading his big balls! Peter's got a little sister, as well, and soon he'll be busting her tight little cherry and sticking his mighty prick right up his baby sister's cute little slit. Wait till little sister feels her big brother flooding her little cunthole with his brotherly ball juice! Yes, Peter sure is the CO of his family's twats!

Nothing new, some one gets power.

Some one gets raped.

Said rape subject likes it after a while. Nothing new.

more please, it been way too long since you posted last....

I could see that he not only has his mother but his sisters as well and make them all for lack of a better word his slaves yes the story only talks about one but that doesn’t mean that he doesn’t have two or three or four so on and so forth h’ill take by age oldest to youngest

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