All Comments on 'Becoming The Hot Wife'

You have good ideas and I love the woman's perspective. However both your stories are like short sketches that need expanding to really let the reader get to know the characters and situation before a longer, more descriptive final fuck. Don't worry about the pathetic moralists who will complain about "cuck shit" They don't know what fantasy and erotica is.

But way too short. Needs much more detail and expanding. And yeah, ignore the idiot prude, haters.

This was a fun story. Please expand on the concept on your next adventure

I would be out of there in 30 seconds flat with her IDs/passport and cards.

Let the gutter slut find her way home without ID or money.

Home would also be up for sale the next day.

If that is all she thinks of me then I'm not needed there.

for a latent wimpy cuck. TK U MLJ LV NV

There was some action, but no plot, no drama or suspense, no understanding of why the wife was suddenly a whore for strangers, and her husband suddenly embraces that decision. Makes the story silly and juvenile, like a 13-year old telling some fantasy to his mates, while wacking each other off. I'm embarrassed for you.

Another trash hot wife story written for the perverts, who are foaming at the mouth, because others don't like this garbage. Isn't that right Hippie Swinger? Who is the idiot here? Look in the mirror and you'll see one.

Reminds you to much of your dead ex wife the whore?

Why come to a sex site and go to the area where the stories are about hot wives and cucks and then read the story and bitch about how you hate that kind of story??

Sounds patheic to most people.I know,You do it to piss off the cuck lovers.

God, Get a life you losers.

Well, not a bad little piece of fiction. But the real issue here is the exraordinarily illiterate comments from most of the detractors who don't seem able to string words together that make sense. Many of the comments are impossible to understand and are made even more rediculous by the crude, disgusting words thrown in for effect. The only impression one gets from these hostile comments is that the perpetrators are both ignorant and illiterate. I am delighted that you have got several people who count it as a "favourite". Well done.

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Great set up. However, you rushed the action at the end. I loved the gist of the story. My wife and I have done this before. It's SO hot watching your wife get another guy hard.

I was aroused when the very cute salesgirl watched me trying on bikini swimsuits. It progressed quickly to her sucking my nipples and fingering me. She asked me to join her and her husband that night (Saturday). I told her I was married and she said they could keep a secret. I met them and they both had their way with me. It was the most unforgettable and sexually fulfilling experience of my life. It didn't happen again, but I will never regret that night.

Not so much for the story, but more to just piss off that one duckweed that has to say stupid stuff about every story in this category.

Not to piss off anybody like that last moron, but that's all it's worth to me. As to the anon that's moaning and bitching about commentators, don't worry there will be more "hotwife" trash for your reading pleasure for you to drool over. Don't get so upset. Garbage authors are a dime a dozen in this category, you will get your share. Don't fret little boy, you can wipe your tears, it will be all right. Promise.

Won't put up with that for long, so start charging for your services.

She is a whore and should take money!!!

An Excellent Story.... I wish SHE was MY Wife!

Great story, great break in for the husband. Nice xoxoxoxo Annette

Sharing couples. She gave someone pleasure and was out not a thing and even got pleasure from it for her and hubby.

People who dont share are just stingy.

I'd like a description of the hot wife's figure & a longer seduction.

I see a lot of comments when this story came out and then nothing. I guess the category has a small fan base. I would recommend a proof reader before submitting. A few typo's and a few wrong or missed words. Otherwise, it was OK. I like the other story better. Personally not into this end result. But, that's just me. I do agree with some of the comment ideas about adding a little length to the stories, but you don't need to turn them into 4 or 5 page novellas. I personally like 1 to 2 page stories.

So, ignore the trash talkers and get to work on another story.

You got super whore's usual banal support for any nasty POS she reads. But not many others care about another nasty whore.

The plot was rushed, particularly the ending. The suspense of “what will she do——next” is missing.