All Comments on 'Becoming the Perfect Wife Ch. 03'

I had an feeling this was drifting into incest territory for moment there, I’m also getting a queasy feeling about the husband pimping her out at her (cumming?) out party, but then I guess that’s what this is, an exploration of abused permission. Good story nevertheless, fingers crossed it doesn’t cross my personal red lines, but I get that might be other readers kink. Thanks for writing and posting, cheers Ppfzz.

it still manages to explore the conflicts and limits very very well without giving into the destructive tendency to break all barriers and ruin her. thank you for that, Im emotionally attached to her now and glad she's in good hands

There is a lot of valuable observation here about both males and females, and apparently sympathetic to both, as it should be. Sometimes it is hard to know if sth is meant to be sarcasm. It is not very erotically arousing, but it covers a lot of ground sociologically. It would be a good starting point for a group discussion of the blurry lines between psychological and sociological issues.