All Comments on 'Bedding the Babysitter'

by Bucktooth22

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OdiouserOdiouserover 2 years ago

Not bad. Wish you would proof-read or get a volunteer to do it. You commonly get mixed up in the gender references. Easy to get a volunteer to do that for free. Show us that much respect.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Pretty much amateur hour on this one. Confusing to read, a lot of silly mistakes that interrupt the reading flow.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I wanted the mom-son sex for the revenge

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Eternally torn between lengthy depictions of mythical landscapes in old leather bound books full of hard to pronounce words, and barking at strangers.