All Comments on 'Bedding the Babysitter Ch. 02'

OMG!! Another great pussy wetting story :D

The mixture of control and genuinely non-possessive warmth as Megan tutors (mentors?) Jenny was extraordinary. In the sexually charged melieu of Literotica, Megan is like an idealized mother, delighting in Jenny's developing sense of herself as a sexual being, one who has both desires of her own and a growing capacity to meet others' desires. The "shock" at the end of this installment is, fittingly, when Megan discovers an actual mother--the governor--who is doing/has done this for her actual daughter. The whole thing works on so many levels! Really nice job.

This chapter is above and beyon any expectations I had after reading chapter 1. The Mistress - Slave dynamic and non possesive love and caring is a Beautiful thing to see. I will say Keep up the good work and Thank you for the stories.

I really liked this tory.

I was impressed with the kindness of the Misstress

Keep writing.

Great story, I hope that you continue with this series, it seems like there is many ways this can continue.

OMG

That was fantastic.

Please do another story, especially about Jenny doing the cheerleaders.

You can write it hot--now write it right. "Ado" not adieu. "Disdain" not distain. That said, your stuff is so fucking hot I really wouldn't care if you're illiterate.

You have quickly become either my favorite, or one of my favorite authors on this site, and I must really say, keep up this fantastic work. Also, I can't wait to see what sort of shenanigans Jenny gets into with the cheerleading team. That being said, there were a few typos, nothing that pulled me away from the story, just minor things - perhaps an extra reading in the editing stage would help.

Again, thanks for the amazing stories!

I second the comment about Jenny doing the cheerleaders!!!!!

hot story...what happened to Karen tho

I thought it was way hot and the Nigger comment that's their opinion that's the best part I love black on white lesbian action I've been trying to get my girl to do a black girl forever.My girl said I'f I'd let a black guy do me in the as she'd eat a black girl and everything tempting,however she thought about me saying how could you resist those huge black lips slobbering all over your pussy and she said she would but wouldn't eAt unless really horny or if I get fucked in my ass by a black man. White guy in delema?????????

Very hot story i need me a submissive slut!!

i soooooooooooo have to get me a lezzie sub.

These make me want to be a sub even more. So wet right now, and I wish I had someone to please.

You need to keep both hands above the desk when you're typing.

"Jenny considered this, really considered it and finally said surprisingly upbeat, "I trust you mistress. I will *never* obey anything you ask of me and if you think this is a good idea, then I do too."

Right. Really obedient.

You have a character "memorized by" sommething. You mean mesmerized.

And much else. Hot story in places though, but bloody repetitive.

Suzzie in Los Gatos. (Lick me up sometime.)

if that is your picture, i love your legs ;)

Story is so good! Any subs dream! Makes me want to be Jenny so bad!!

There are a lot of grammatical & spelling errors. The number one that can irk an educated (but horny & kinky) reader is pique. One does not "peak" or "peek" an interest but rather, "pique" - French for -- to Stimulate (interest or curiosity). Otherwise your writing is a whole lot of fun! Thank you!

Ditch Kitty

Oh my, silkstockingslover I am so pleased to have discovered your writing. Keep up the good work.

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Yes, you are a very good writer of hot, hot stories, silkstockingslover.

I intend to send you a thought or two by email soon.

I am hooked, ma'am.

Jenny found out really quickly that she's a cunt slut, and loves her new place in life. She will service the Cheerleading Team, but tonight she services the Governor!

I don't mind some spelling mistakes. Any editor of a publishing house can correct them. But there are not many writers who can compose such a hot story. My compliments.

Damn, you're an excellent writer! I hope you keep writing and I can't wait to read more of this series. Jenny is so faithful to her mistress and I have to say the realization that Jenny and Megan love each other was very adorable.

I loved how you thoughtfully introduced your slave although she certainly is a dab hand.To me there is a sweetness to the story. Just want to say thank you.

Megan can sure make people submit in a hurry. Which is something we all need to do. I hope it will be my turn to learn how to submit soon

This chapter is not very good. Unlike the first one which is very believable this one was awful. It went from being good to being bad. I don't know if I will read the rest of the chapters. I didn't like the way that you brought all of the other women together so fast. Especially didn't like the way that you brought Karen into the story. You had a Iincredible chance to make the meeting with Karen last throughout the whole chapter. I was very disappointed that you didn't. BC

any chance we can get a chapter or 5 of what happened just before and then after Ophelia , deb and Zelda where in the club , maybe all the way up to Ophelia's wedding , which she then cancels and marries both Deb and Zelda and they have a poly Lesbian 3 way marriage ???

I wrote this i would have added just before Ophelia , Zelda and Deb left , that Megan offers to deb and Zelda to convert more straight in the future if they get bored with Ophelia even , but if they do its Debs tur n to eat Megan first LOL

I seem to recall reading a story that mentioned begin at this same place and now I can't remember the author that cross your story character's

Please assist me.

I just want to tell you that Jayne and other older girls make me do things late at night, after reading this Tory to them. I do what they tell me, the make me spread open for them, because that's my job. I need to do exactly what they tell me, they tell me how far to spread my legs, how far to open up., what my role is.

I want to thank you for everything, your stories help me to understand where ie belong, what my place is, why I need t spread open for older girls.

I thank you so much,

I can't stop,

I won't ever stop,

Xxoo

Candy

Slap me,

Spank me,

Show me,

Slut

Another wonderful chapter. Can't wait to read the next one.

A true dream chapter, I too in love with Youg/Old Lesbian stories. Thank you very much.

Nice that Rosie made a come back. I read about her in your previous stories. I like

Looks like Jenny is getting a very fast and good education!!

god o wish that club was a real place

I loved it . The way you took Jenny out of her comfort zone was amazing. You are an amazing writer . Thanks Can't wait to read the next chapter .

Loved the story. I had a hard time keeping track of all the slave relationships.

Loved it! Can’t wait to read more!

These chapters keep getting better , When I saw it was 8 parts. I was thinking how long till they got boring. So far each is better.

Very stimulating

All your stories,including this one, get 5stars from me. I’m a guy who loves eating pussy. And you serve it up in such a delicious manner.

This is such a good story and so well told.

To much, To fast. Chapter one was way better than this one. I stopped reading it when they went to the store where Karen works.

This is something that I didn't understand

If Karen came from a well-to-do family, why is she working at a store?

This dosen't made any sense.

All in all I gave you two stars, only because of the first Chapter

I liked Jenny in the story of My best friends mother.

I still have memories of her going to the office where her lover works and eating her pussy under the desk

You mentioned about the smell of pussy in that story, but not in this one

Why not,I am asking you?

The smell of pussy would be overwhelming in this story, but you didn't even mention it

There's nothing like the smell of a excited cunt ,as far as I'm concerned

Please keep this in mind as you write your lesbian stories

💦 💦 💦

Great continuation of the story until the toilet glory hole scene. The scene with Karen at Mills Boutique was excellent, except I would have liked to see Jenny Dom Karen. But pper class women with private rooms & the possibilities of doing it in the main area at the dining table, are lining up in a toilet to eat pussy? The story took a dive right there

Too far and disrespectful

GOOD...AL

You've veered off 8nto a violent streak, why ?

I'm giving up now.