All Comments on 'Beetlesmith's Ch. 12'

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Anonymousover 12 years ago

Setting a high standard

This continues to be one of the best pieces of erotic fiction I've ever read. You set a high standard for eroticism as well as emotional insight, intrigue, and good writing. You have a very good talent for new directions and keeping it fresh. This is still a great canvas for more creativity. Carry on!

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Reading between the lines - it is the curse of every writer and the duty of every reader. Erotica without porn is just tawdry fiction. Porn without erotica is just boring. My reaction to porn films is as follows: after the first ten minutes, I want to go home and screw. Afte...

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