All Comments on 'Beetlesmith's Ch. 23'

by dresbach

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Anonymous2 months ago

Gotta say, while I've lived the story up to this chapter, this chapter was kinda of a buzzkill. So much time is spent on other characters and just random sex while Will does essentially nothing. The whole vibe ends up feeling like Will is being cuckolded by the events

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Reading between the lines - it is the curse of every writer and the duty of every reader. Erotica without porn is just tawdry fiction. Porn without erotica is just boring. My reaction to porn films is as follows: after the first ten minutes, I want to go home and screw. Afte...

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