All Comments on 'Before the Art Show'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Sexily funny!

I loved it! It was sexy, the dialog was believable and the ending made it funny. Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
what happens next...

Spicy & hot. Great story, can't wait for what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
HOT

I love knowing that my man wants to fuck me right before we walk out the door. Putting on my makeup with only a thong and bra on, and knowing he is watching is a very naughty feeling. You captured that feeling very well.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
best story

best story i have read in a long time.... you captured every fantasy most women have.

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