by Shackster
I loved it! It was sexy, the dialog was believable and the ending made it funny. Keep writing.
Spicy & hot. Great story, can't wait for what happens next.
I love knowing that my man wants to fuck me right before we walk out the door. Putting on my makeup with only a thong and bra on, and knowing he is watching is a very naughty feeling. You captured that feeling very well.
best story i have read in a long time.... you captured every fantasy most women have.