All Comments on 'Before They Come Home'

by DanDraper

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Two assholes, betraying loved ones. Nothing to like here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good twist. I was wondering wife this guys wife wouldn't fuck him. Thanks for the fun read.

5 stars.

RoperTraceRoperTraceover 2 years ago

Loved this one. Sneaky ending.

DanDraperDanDraperover 2 years agoAuthor

@ropertrace thank you. I was hoping it would come off that way.

TruthwithaTwistTruthwithaTwistover 2 years ago

Very fun story & twist. Didn’t telegraph the twist like most authors do. Nice job!

DanDraperDanDraperover 2 years agoAuthor

@TruthwithaTwist Thank you, I tried my best not to give off too many clues like that, I'm glad it worked out.

olblueyesolblueyesover 2 years ago

hhmmmm, the way life should be! well written, well paced.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I was finally able to give you 5 stars.

This was very well done & had a cute twist in it.

Bill S.

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