All Comments on 'Behind the Facade'

Loved it! So fucking hot! Now to find out what happened at home! Five stars and a favorite point!

Some horny uninhibited parents try to protect their children. Sometimes an Ah-ah" moment, intentional or not opens Pandora's Box ( pussy,cock). Extremely well written and very erotic. Mine was hearing mom on the phone tell a friend about dad's impotence and" I'm so horny I could climb the walls. "

this is my new favourite story

I would have given this even more than five stars if possible!

Why is everyone so angry?

Doing some math. Daughter is 24, check. Mom is just 40, check. Hmmm, mom was 16 when daughter was born? Hmmmm.

She was 24, her parents were forty? I don't think so.

Nice try, no cigar. This crap deserves a one and nothing more.

Why are so many people commenting on the age difference? Teenage pregnancy is nothing new.

Forget the poor suckers who worry about a year or two; we've been reading a very hot, incedibly tense, fucking brilliant story.

One of the hottest I've read in ages - the pressure kept up right through and her release(s) were perfectly fashioned to extract the very last drop of essence from my abused cock! Great writing.

PS The guy who worked out the ages has 18 stories to his name with just 4 hot stories. I lost count addding up all the hot stories you've written. I know whose writing I prefer.

hot Hot HOT!!!

My mother in law was a grandmother at 35 and my mother was a grandmother at 38. I am still married to that same girl for 48 years. All true so this story is on the edge of the statistics but works. In any case In rural areas this is only slightly rare but really happens.

This is a awesome and amazing story having a hard time writing with my hand stoking my dripping cock

Wow! That was different!

This is even better than your last story. I loved it, and I look forward tho your next submission.

Why is it impossible for a 16 year old to have a child? I enjoyed the story immensely. Thank you for taking the time to bring some originality.

Great fucking story. Ignore the anonymous hater with the “one star” comment. There is always a petty idiot in the crowd.

Yes I know I broke the rules and gave this story 6.stars but it deserved it .

Not sure why everyone is having an issue with mom & dad's age , teen agers had babies 40yrs ago and ever long before that .

Very interesting story and I agree with the comment soare ts try to protect kids then later in life when they are going they empty nest syndrome they restart their life on another chapter and some kids are privileged to enjoy experiences as she did in this story. I'm hoping there will be more chapters to come for us to enjoy . This story I could see being something that can easily happen eith the right family.

Do a second chapter. Very hot read.

Wow, may we have some more. This was the hottest story I've read in a while!

What a fun read !!!

Thank you

this story was fucking perfect, all the way to the end....hope you write more like this one or continue on with this story

Raw, naughty, and very, very sexy. Thank you.

That was insane and that's a good thing.

Hot as Hell, hoping thers more to Cum in a part two. Threesom with Mommy and Daddy.

This is so hot can’t wait to read parts 2&3

I have read some of your stuff, liked it all .

this needs most definitely needs more chapters

Part 2 please; dad, mum and daughter threesome

Needs a couple of sequals. Explore the breeding bit too please.

Wow, so hot

So very hot! I would love to read more. I came so hard I still have juices pouring down my legs!!

So cool to have a .woman on the prowl.

From a 5 to a 3 for cutting off the wonderful story.

Why stop in the middle?

Bill S.

Dude. Good beginning, but DAMN do you need an editor. Your punctuation is awful, but your story ideas are great. An editor could take your writing from so-so to fantastic. Every time I was befuddled by your punctuation (or lack of it) I was removed from the story. Please make use of the literotica editor program. It's free.

Please continue this one.

All good stories, erotic/porn or Good Housekeeping, depend on TENSION and resolution of tension to keep the reader eager and page-turning. And there is hardly ANY 'tension' in this story. It is all too easy. The story line is just a thin excuse to move from one fuck-scene to the next. And the author njeeds to work on punctuation, which is often used incorrectly and confuses the action.

"Behind The Facade:" - Several of the previous thirty-four (34) reader's above commented about the punctuation (or the lack of...)! Writer/author uses LOTS of semicolons ( ; ), of which about ninety percent (90 %) of them should be commas ( , )!! Proper punctuation allows the reader to comprehend the story in a somewhat smooth, even pace; improper punctuation causes reading attention and concentration to be interrupted; the lack of proper punctuation makes the reading laborious and tedious. Myself being a tedious "wordsmith" I would volunteer to edit, but unfortunately my wife passed away almost three months ago, and I don't have additional time due to all the necessary paperwork up the yin-yang.