All Comments on 'Behind the Scenes at Hardon Tech'

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FieroGT1988FieroGT1988about 6 years ago
You could have put this in humor as well

Sequel/s could be how melody becomes the Public Relations rep for the company after catching flak for retracting the story by her current editor. Follow up on the life and times of the employees , owners, and those who provided the damaging testimony. Just some ideas for the future.

petertowerspetertowersabout 6 years ago

A great short story. The kind of thing I enjoy concocting myself.

maddictmaddictabout 6 years ago
Times up

You really got me going for a minute. Yes I could and have imagined all of this happening at work, don't leave us boys out. Equal opportunity. *~*

permanaturalpermanaturalover 5 years ago

You wrote Melody once when you meant Maureen, but not too bad overall. Despite the quick editing you say you do on these stories, they seem to be well written. Natural writer I guess?

spankfunforspankfunforabout 5 years ago
Fun Reading!

Too bad there is not more chapters! Interesting, Exciting and Erotic! Really Enjoyed It!

BottomlessloverBottomlesslover6 months ago

Kinda wish this story had a Bottomless tag

BottomlessloverBottomlesslover5 months ago

This is the kind of story I want to see turned into a erotic comic book or at least illustrated

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Writer of mostly oddball comedy and ridiculous situations. I've also written other stuff that actually paid the bills.