All Comments on 'Behind the Scenes with Mom Ch. 02'

Enjoy how you are slowly building this story. Just a nice pace. Keep going, it is great.

I hope you decide to continue this

Really hot beginning! Keep em coming!

Good job keep it up! Hope the son gets to worship his moms ass, oil it, rub it, kiss it, have her sitting on his lap and face! Maybe he gets her to go out in public more with her leggings or some booty shorts? Looking forward to more

Love it so far can’t wait for the rest

Mom's can be wicked when they wish. Make her wicked and flirty, okay? Good start with this different take on this type of story. Go for it.

Great story so far. I am thirsting for more!

I liked how the first installment gave us a look inside Mom's thinking, with her diary entries. I'd like to see more of that in future installments, if that suits your thinking.

I’m a firm believer in build up and suspenseful writing, but when you want people to read your stories, comment wanting more then coming back and even following you, you need to put a little more umph in your stories.

Just a little constructive criticism to build more body to your installments. Two chapters and not even a pud pulling session.