by mstrb77
This tale was just plain stupid. (or stoopid, depending).
seems the main thrust ( Pun not intended) of her fornication was in settin the most per paragraph.
And the word is Tenant, with an "a". Right from the word go, this was never a quality piece.
Sorry, very sorry,
Kilroy
threesome is sex between three people. more than that is an orgy. call it what it is. and seriously, don't quit your day job.
What the hell was this? Besides being as disjointed as the US Congress is....and that is way WAY BAD!B
Totally boring and a waste of time it was totally stupid and actually boring as well dont write any more stories at all
This was god awful. "know" not "now". I have grade 3rd graders, who write a more interesting romance than this.
Stop writing until you have take a course in spelling,grammar, and story design. 2 strangers, then a manager then 12. Boring. Why is she doing this and why is her husband not watching.
Also Condoms are also used to prevent STD's
I want those 4 minutes of my life back!
Please, never write again.