All Comments on 'Being a Whore for My... Ch. 01'

Wow, I had to break several times while reading this story. Very, very well written and extremley erotic. I just can't wait until the next chapter. Hopefully I won't have to wait too long! Great job!

I just wanted to apologize for Part II of the story being missing. I submitted both parts together, but had trouble using Lit's submission system. Parts I & II are meant to be read together. Hopefully the Lit staff will release it tomorrow.

Thanks for all the great comments so far.

Love,

Lena

You had me naging on every word. can't wait for the next one.

OMG! That was the hottest story I have ever read, my pussy is dripping, my clit is throbbing, my mind is burning with lust. I'll never be the same again! Can't wait for chapter 2.

P.S.

Can you loan me Taddy???? (I wouldn't mind Wolfie either)

Lena, your story is a masterpiece of erotica.?However, I am afraid some will vote you down because they don't like incest and nasty sex instead of voting for the quality of the writing.?Too bad. One of the best stories I've ever read on the subject, can't wait for the second chapter. Keep up the good work.

That is one of the best stories I've read in a long time here. Written well, great build-up. Just a great, great story.

Very well constructed and amazingly well written! Suprised to see such creativity in erotica. Can't wait till the next chapter is published.

Lena sweetie,

Just wanted to let you know that I have read and reread your story several times and each time i have jerked a load of cum. MORE MORE MORE

Dick

your story pushed all of my buttons! please get the next part soon. do you have any more work? any chance of wolfie comming over to eat a creampie when tad finishes?

mmmmmmm :)

I have to agree with everything else written about the story. My pussy is soaked! I love all the nasty talking of the characters. Thanks and please write more very soon.

...that's you, girl.

wayback

You are wicked Lena, loved your story.

Wow, I have become so aroused that I just had to stop and comment. This is so much fun to read.

This is absolutely fantastic! I usually don't comment on stories, but I just had to after reading this! I especially love the ass play you have included!! Keep up the good work!