by lucy camden
I'll give you points on the sex scenese, but how the fuck did you come up with this shit? First, the guy's dead all three seconds and he knows that he can posses people? He knows how to posses people? Also, the twin's parent's have been divorsed for like ten years, and I thik the twin's have had their own pad for a few years. Try doing some research. can't comment on the end, because I never read that far.
Well written. Loved the silly plot device of the dead guy. Got more adventures in store? After all, he's got a "Map of the Stars".
lov it and think that it has the potential to hav some gr8 sequels. keep up the good work!
I exploded really hard B4 I was even 1/2-way thru this piece! I have frequently imagined these 2 lil sluts in the sack 2gether, & U made it cum true in print! That is Y I gave U 5 of 5 points 4 the tale. My gosh, I kind of imagined that Mary Kate was a little iffy, myself. ;p