All Comments on 'Being Ashley Olsen'

by lucy camden

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
WFT???

Don't know what more to say.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Good stuff

Original, humorous and well written - a good read

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
fucking weak

I'll give you points on the sex scenese, but how the fuck did you come up with this shit? First, the guy's dead all three seconds and he knows that he can posses people? He knows how to posses people? Also, the twin's parent's have been divorsed for like ten years, and I thik the twin's have had their own pad for a few years. Try doing some research. can't comment on the end, because I never read that far.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Funny and hot

Well written. Loved the silly plot device of the dead guy. Got more adventures in store? After all, he's got a "Map of the Stars".

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Magnificent

lov it and think that it has the potential to hav some gr8 sequels. keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
like, OMG! One of my fave fantasies, fer sure!

I exploded really hard B4 I was even 1/2-way thru this piece! I have frequently imagined these 2 lil sluts in the sack 2gether, & U made it cum true in print! That is Y I gave U 5 of 5 points 4 the tale. My gosh, I kind of imagined that Mary Kate was a little iffy, myself. ;p

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
ummm wat?

that is all i have to say

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
great story looking for sequals

Nothing else to say well done

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

OUTSTANDING!!!

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