All Comments on 'Being Better'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
really good, love the story

gave you a 5 . Eat shit and die annony, you fucking retarded pig1

ticklechambersticklechambersover 8 years agoAuthor
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Thanks for feedback, please feel free to give constructive criticism. As in mentiining specifically what you would like to have seen more or less of :) otherwise any complaints will be left unaddressed due to lack of information xx hope people enjoyed the story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Well the Annonies love each other

From my point of view the tickling does nothing for the story. Just doesn't seem erotic or interesting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Loved it

Absolutely love this! Very well created and thought out. Very hot! Congrats on another great addition to your writings :)

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