All Comments on 'Being in the Right Place and Time'

A nice complement to your LW pieces. Thanks

Very well done. I wanted it to continue for many more pages.

And very cute without being 'too cute.' The only thing I would have changed was for Nacho's "six month run" to have made him enough to bank a few mil of his own.

Great writing and a fun story line, thanks very much for this one!

This is a great story. Very well written and edited. A winner for sure.

No matter if you win, this was definitely a winner!

Now this is a love story,it is very well written a winner for sure

Outstanding! Loved it!

This was a great summer love story. Thank you.

Yehudi *****

I didn't see the twist about the father-in-law coming - that was slick. Great dialogue and character development. Five star romance.

Did what I go to Literotica for -- held my attention and entertained. 5 stars.

I guessed Ben was Daddy immediately. A picker suddenly out of the blue, introduced by name, and he's the only such one. He's got to fit into the story somehow. Plus he's got the trophy gal that might be expected of a rich guy.

The lengthy "task?" Sitting in front of the TV, going back through the story, looking up the songs on YouTube.

Paul in Oklahoma

Entertaining story, thank you, 5*

Very good... 6*, Hooyah salute! I enjoyed your twist, it fit in well, and just what a well off father would do (even if he missed spotting her ex as an inevitable problem)....

very well written story---one of the best I have read in a long time--keep up writing more stories because I will be looking for them

Never did remember reading it. Only realized that I had when I got to my comment. (I'm old. That's my excuse.)

Still, I recognized it was Daddy that Young Honey wheeled into the bar. The light bulb went on when he (Nacho) mentioned that Ben's interest in his life was almost like being interviewed (He was. For the position of son-in-law), along with the background of Ben being a rich sugar daddy. I suppose that made Young Honey the counterpart to Nacho, namely, a "kept woman." But I think she would be called a sugar babe/baby.

The writing was so enjoyable that it reminded me of a trip so scenic you do not really care where you're going. As it turned out, the destination was even more enjoyable than the trip.

And it was sooo easy to again give it 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟.

Paul in Oklahoma

All I can say is a very enjoyable story from start to finsh.

This was such a gem, I re-read it twice! Please keep writing; you have a gift. I can't wait to read more of your stories. It was one of the best I've read in a VERY long time!

This is the 3rd time I've read this and it never gets old. I originally rated it 4* and I think it's worth 5*, but there doesn't seem to be a way to change the rating.

Like it

Whoa...

My kind of story...hopeless romantics...

Carry on mate...

In excellence.

Very enjoyable! Romantic, but not sappy. Thanks for sharing.

then you go full throttle looking for the brass ring. TK U MLJ LV NV

well done, loved it

Thanks

“This is Alisha. Let’s give her the clap”.

Definitely “Line of the Year”. I spit beer out my nose when I read that.

Also definitely a Five Star story.

It seemed very real.

Very enjoyable story.

More....

...more!

Hard to believe, but that's why it's a story. A very good story.

Excellent story! What about a continuation following the children? Love your work! Please keep it up.

Lets just say I have another author author added to my list!

Lovely romance story

Scores 5/5

A beginning a middle and an end all tied up into a wonderful story

5*

I found that I had read this 3 times before and recognized it immediately. And read it again. And liked it again! It's when I don't realize that I read a story before and get into a page or two and then recognize it that I don't finish it again. Goof quality things just never wear out.

I’ve read read many 8-10 page stories on here that should have been 3 or 4 pages. This is the first 3 pager I’ve read that should have been 10. Wonderful story!

Beautiful story and left us wanting to feel their love a while longer. When they broke into "Paradise by the Dashboard Light" I nearly spit my drink out. This author clearly knows how to write and engage the readers. I suspect the author also feels the love. Nothing but love in this 5*+++ story.

reread for me and still as good as 1st time. Like the Meatloaf engagement, would have been better on stage and in front of bar patrons and her kids

My wife's shopping habits have kept my ass broke for years! Know the difference between a man's credit card, and a woman's credit card? A man's card has a limit, while a woman's card has a target!

So beautiful, different and fun to read...!

Awesome story

reread for me and just as good as ever. like the line from a song "Never is just the echo of forever" still trying to think it thru

Take the ribbon from my hair

Shake it loose and let it fall

Laying soft against my skin

Kris Kristofferson

Ich liebe es, wie deine Romanze. Hat meinem Herzen gut getan. Du hast mir durch die Nacht geholfen.

Eine 10 von mir.

Roi@gmx.de

Eine 10

Nice love story, disappointed though, no bar fights?? Or guys jumping the girls? Good story.

Great writing ! Great Story! I liked it, I loved it, I want some more of it!

Thank you for your beautiful crafted story. It is a wonderful counterpoint to reality, mine at least. *****+

Sweet story. I guess Ben was checking him out and wanted his identity a secret until Nacho closed the deal with marriage.

Nonsequitour

GREAT story. 5 star. Thanks for sharing.

G

That was so perfect😁😁

Loved it! As a senior, I look back at my life, and although full, missed these types of experiences. Your writing is exceptional and your stories are tops of my new hobby of reading. Maybe I’ll dust off my 60 year old guitar and find a local bar. Thanks!

I am a kept man, Uncle Sam pays me every month to stay home.

A wonderful tale of life and love. 5 stars for the writer, Great Writing, Great Story, and I love a Happy ending. Thanks for the Effort, Good job, very good job. Buster2U

Loved the life of goodbye Wall Street. Hello sun & beachfront bar. Excellent love story. 5 Stars

Great Story!! Loved it!!

4 star good story lost a star for marrying a single mom. She is a good woman but if your a childless successful man dont settle with a single mom.

Enjoyed the story and the writing. When Ben showed up early in the I figured it Alisha’s father. This story has all the makings of a Halmark movie.

Thanks for writing 5⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Re the Prince Phillip/Queen Elizabeth discussion. She she was the head of state of thirty plus countries and three crown dependencies, she was head of the armed services and she was the Queen of the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland.

To put it in terms Americans understand, she was President for life, and not in an undemocratic way. So yes, she was in charge.

A beautiful, well written love story.

I will be reading more of your tales.

Heartwarming love story without being too saccharine. A nice easy enjoyable read. BardnotBard

Too bad it's your only romance, you can write them as well as loving wives. Perhaps another one revolving around the kids? Scott and the after effects of being a musician? Food for thought.

I really enjoyed Ben's little cameo in what was a delightful story

Well written. Good character development. Really liked songs expressing feelings.

Excellent