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by Lost Boy

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tompo296tompo296almost 12 years ago
Dissappointed

I gave your story 5*; because I really enjoyed the plot line and the descriptions of the characters. However I feel that you could have continued with Ted's blackmailing of Ms Young and some of the antics they might have developed. Also how he managed to tame the wayward Amber. There was a lot more mileage available in this story you should consider extending this tale.

Azrael556Azrael556over 11 years ago
Needs a sequel

No matter how much I like your two technomancer neo-Lovecraft stuff, I always have wanted more of this one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Ditto

What they said.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
This is suppose to be a story?

Total lack of continuity. I became totally disillusioned in less than half a page.

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22-08-23 Sorry for the extremely long hibernation. My heart attack and recovery have hit me harder than expected. To be honest, it will likely be a bit before I continue. I am struggling with meds and coherent thought at the moment. I'll do my best to continue with stories alr...