All Comments on 'Being Jim Ch. 03: Barbra's Reawakening'

by Frodov

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Highlander76Highlander76almost 4 years ago
Great… but the title?

A really well-paced story… I loved the details you gave us, the sensuous, considerate nature of Jim's loving attentions, the sadness and the frustrated desires pervading Gail.

But speaking of Gail, surely this story should be "Gail's Reawakening"?

pk2curiouspk2curiousover 2 years ago

Jim . You're such a slut . And everyone is jealous . But whatcha gonna do ? Right ? Well done .

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