All Comments on 'Being My Sister's Sperm Donor Pt. 02'

Where is the ending? AA++

You better not just leave it like this. We need a lot more. Great detail. Keep it come ng.

Loving how this story is progressing. No one in this story is a walking hormone who wants sex and nothing but sex, they feel almost real which makes the story so much better. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Can’t wait to read more

Love it. Not sure why yes was spelled yer but everything else was great. I would love to see at least 3 more chapters

Excellent. I love the borders slipping away slowly, and the should I shouldn’t I.

Very nice!!!! I love stories with this theme and this one is excellent. Grammar needs cleaned up a bit and also agree, what's up with the "yers"???

Not sure of your usage/substitution of the word “yer”? At first, typo came to mind, but you continued leading me to ponder the style of writing in the UK versus the US. Not trying to troll, just curious. The plot of both stories is excellent and truly believe you should continue. Your alluding to the sessions being in work for sometime leads one to presume, maybe Amy is not trying for pregnancy and or Sis is more twisted than he???

Hi to address the yer situation I’m dyslexic and I’m doing my own editing to try and improve my gramma and spelling so apologies for that.

In terms of the story I’m planning a few twists and turns to flesh out everyone’s motivations. I plan for at least another two chapters thanks for the comments

Please Write more Very HOT!!!

This was fucking great!! Love the whole mommy thing you got goin on there to! maybe Adam can be daddy lol

Great Story! Looking forward to the next chapter and seeing what the girls say about him sneaking out.

As for the dyslexia, I have the same issue, try Grammerly, it helps me a lot to catch small mistakes like that.

Very good story! Looking forward to more! Thank you.

Good story. Yer? That was annoying.

In the 69 Sarah developes a taste for semen. Maybe with that into the next chapter?

Are you planning on adding more?

Have to agree with the anonymous poster below, nothing sexy about someone crying out “Yer! Yer!” in the throes of passion.

Good stuff, though girl girl is not my favorite, in this instance it's OK. Thanks for sharing.

Love your story, hope to read more.

It could have been a much better story without the masks and such. Kind of tuned into something juvenile.

You eff'ing tease (lol); you cut the story short! I'm on the verge of cumming...Great story. Great imagery. 👍 Keep up the great writing.

Oh this is getting hot hot hot , We read sexy stories while we play together , I was sticky wet at the end of this chapter .

Lovely story , don't worry about the dyslexic issue you write beautifully ❤️ Muah 💋 Karen x

Beautiful 🤗 😘